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Black Locks, countinued

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“ I honestly don’t know when she’ll wake up…or if she will at all…”
“ Aren't you a doctor?! You should know these things!” Her mother proclaimed.
“Yes, but this is a rare case! I mean I’m guessing it’s a crazy long coma…” The doctor stated.
“How did you get this job” She said as she scowled at him. The doctor appeared to have had enough and left the room. Her mother grabbed her daughter’s cold hard hand and tried to hold back a tear as she saw her own daughter in a state she never thought she’d be in. Her lips were a pale blue and her skin tone also pale but with all the physical signs of demise her heartbeat was still there but faint as the wind blowing through trees. It just all blended in and sometimes you don’t know if it’s beating or not but you hope it is…Her black locks were matted against her face and was also cold. She looked peaceful yet determined as her brows were slightly tense.
    Then her mother also started to notice her eyes moving back and forth frantically underneath her eyelids. Her mother’s eyes started to widen in amazement of the first sign of life since this all started. Her mother quickly pulled up a chair to the side of her bed and clenched her hand with both of hers as she started crying. She didn't hold back because these were tears of happiness.
    She awoke in her bed. The sun was out but the sky was white with clouds. The light was shining on her bed and through the hallway. All the doors to the other rooms appeared to be open and empty…She slowly got up and eased down the hallway ever so slowly. She concluded there was no one home but she still felt uneasy.
    I watched her from underneath the bed. I arrived at the house earlier and was greeted by my family, they all favored me over my sister and bought me my own house early on but I was just now “visiting”. I told them all to visit the market and shop while I dealt with my sister and her “troublemaking”. They were all gone and now I could finally pursue my sister…
decided to put a slight spin on things...blah i lost all my writing skills
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